Red velvet dress
Under the bed,
Riding on daydreams
Non-breathable corsets.
Waiting for perfection,
That feeds the mirror,
Faking a smile,
Mustering the fear.
And there in the blues,
As blue as his eyes,
There lies a little bit
Of red Valentine.
Surreal and bizarre,
By so far.
Love seems mean,
Hate takes its turn.
-Sanghamitra Chakrabarty
Copyright © 2016
This perfectly shows my state of mind right now! I can connect to each single word there.. it’s beautiful.. 🙂
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thank you so much 🙂
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wow..really good
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thanks a lot! ^_^
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I do appreciate your likes on my posts. Thanks a ton 🙂
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I loved your posts 🙂
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I’d like to try to set this to music..
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ha ha! Hope it’ll work out 🙂 Thank you for your visit
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This is one of the best poems I have seen in a long time. It’s quite thoughtful. Please, keep writing!
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OMG thank you so much 🙂 This means so much to me!
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Really nice….This made me think of years ago when I was working in a book shop. All of the unattached store clerks went out together on Valentines Day. It was a nice way for the group to have moral support at a time of year when being unattached can feel awkward for some. It was a light evening of fun for them full of humor.
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I never really got the concept of V.Day, there shouldn’t be one particular day to celebrate love because you have to and because you want to… thanks a lot for visiting 🙂
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I agree…My views on the day are a tad bit unromantic. (It is big business) But that is not to say that I do not have a gift for my wife to honor her and the occasion.
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I admire this depiction of Valentine’s and romantic love. Hopeful and contrary. The last lines, though, are especially evocative: “Love seems mean,/Hate takes its turn.” Reading “She Wolf” really sold me, too. Beautiful, powerful–yet she must elude the killing intention of the human world. Thank you!
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Thank you for your visit 🙂 I’m so happy you enjoyed my poems
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Beautiful words!
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Thanks so much Nico 🙂
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Deep, strong, and touching!!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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This has a magical, almost a tune to it. I love how the words flow!
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Thank you so much Swetha 🙂
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Greatly written poem….magnificently truthfully.
Here’s something that fits your poem and the title.
Hope you love it.
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Loved the video 🙂 Thanks so much for sharing…
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This has a melodic feel to it or atleast the way I read it, almost sounded like a country song in my head. lol Loved it!
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So many people are finding this poem melodic! Thanks so much for visiting Tunisia 🙂
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Really great write. Love is so fickle and Valentine so over rated.
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Thanks so much Dave 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Wonderfully written ..:) Your post again held the factor that hate can never travel to the raod where it was once the path of love..:)
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Thank you so much 🙂 glad you liked it
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Love your poetry! Elegant and beautiful!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I’m the one – ‘100th liker’. Lucky winner, I guess. Prizes. Bonanzas. Treat ? 😛
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ha ha! 😉 😛 lucky me! I thank you “sir” from the bottom of my heart for your gracious visit!
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thank you is good. 🙂 thank you for that. 😛
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Beautifully written as always 🙂
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Thanks so much Love 🙂
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Beaustsss
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Beautifully written and soulful as well.
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Thanks so much Kally 🙂
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Very beautiful piece… 🙂
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Thanks a million! 🙂
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Always a delight this….
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WOW–powerful write!
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Thanks for visiting
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Welcome.
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BRAVO!!!! 🙂
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🙂 Thanks for the visit
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